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1. Read the detail of the housing agreement carefully before you buy the house, especially for the (which concerns your family, to sign it at) first time in   your life.

*which concerns your family為贅詞, 不需要

2. A politician addressed the local people loudly on the stage three days ago (ahead).

3. The deeper the sea (is), the thinner the air (is).

4. The old Chinese man who underwent plenty of wars in Taiwan used to send his relatives airmails when he was alive.

5. When the Wright Brothers first dreamed about inventing the airplane (in hope), (other) people considered them foolish.

6. The fat middle aged man (who was fat) fell into talk with the girl who worked at the airport duty-free shop (at the airport).

7. All (of) the actresses who dress (in) colorfully (will) expect (that they can) to get the award , as their (business) value will rise.

8. My father allowed me to play RTS-related computer games (which are about RTS,) after I finished my math homework (to math).

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9. The pandas which like to eat bamboo and climb trees are going extinct because their habitat is being destroyed by human.

10.  It is rather vile how some (of) restaurants don’t like customers to eat alone (are very bad).  

*hate是很重的一個字, 不建議使用

重整如下:

1.  Read the detail of the housing agreement carefully before you buy the house, especially for the first time in your life.

2.  A politician addressed the local people loudly on the stage three days ago.

3.  The deeper the sea, the thinner the air.

4.  The old Chinese man who underwent plenty of wars in Taiwan used to send his relatives airmails when he was alive.

5.  When the Wright Brothers first dreamed about inventing the airplane, people considered them foolish.

6.  The fat middle aged man fell into talk with the girl who worked at the airport duty-free shop.

7.  All the actresses who dress colorfully expect to get the award, as their value will rise.

寫不下 = - = 放在意見欄